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Topic Started: Feb 19 2012, 10:00 AM (1,090 Views)
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Feb 19 2012, 10:00 AM
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Chapter 1: Seven Years Later...
Spoiler: click to toggle Operation Buu - By Vegeta and Socrates.
Chapter 1: Seven years later...
Seven years after the defeat of Cell, the world was at peace. Krillin married Android 18 and had a daughter named Marron. Piccolo still lives on the Lookout with Mr. Popo and Dende. Vegeta and Bulma were still living at Capsule Corp. While Vegeta was training non-stop in the Gravity Chamber, Bulma did the cooking, cleaning and raised Trunks. Gohan is now a teenager, and is now starting school for the first time. Chi-Chi gave birth to Gohan's younger brother, Goten, who looks a lot like Goku. Little did the retired Z-Fighters know that the time of peace was ending. An evil was brewing on Earth. Will the Z-Fighters be able to stop it before it's to late?
Chapter 2: Gohan's first day...
Spoiler: click to toggle Operation Buu - By Vegeta and Socrates.
Chapter 2: Gohan's first day.
Gohan was ready to go to School and start a new chapter in his life. 'Bye Mum! Bye Goten!' he said with excitement. Just before Gohan left, Chi-Chi ran out the door, needing to talk to him. 'Gohan! You forgot your lunch!' she yelled, running up to him. 'Huh?' Gohan wondered. Chi-Chi cought up to Gohan and just advoided falling into a near-by lake. 'G-Gohan! Here's your lunch!' She said, almost out of breath. Gohan grabbed the paper bag out of Chi-Chi's hand. 'Thanks Mum' he said. 'I hope you have a good day' Chi-Chi said to Gohan. 'I will! NIMBUS!' Gohan yelled. Goku's Nimbus appaired out of nowhere and Gohan got on it. 'Nimbus, to Hercule City!' Gohan told the Nimbus. The Nimbus started flying to Hercule City. 'Bye Gohan!' Chi-Chi yelled waving at Gohan. Gohan smiled and waved back at her.
A few minutes later, Gohan and Nimbus arrived at Hercule City. Gohan jumped off Nimbus and started walking. 'Bye Nimbus!' Gohan said waving, as the Nimbus flew away. Gohan started looking around the City. 'If only they knew the truth...' He said to himself. He kept walking and he came across a Bank Robbery. There were about three or four stupid-looking goons carrying Pistols in there hands. 'Hey! Listen up!' One goon yelled. 'If we don't get the two million Zenie that we're after, we'll start shooting!' Gohan punched a wall to release his anger. 'Look at them fiends! Harming all those people just because of their greed!' Gohan yelled. 'I would save them people, but I don't want to be known as a freak on my first day of School!' He said to himself. 'I know! If I go Super Saiyan, nobody would know who I am!' He said. Without hesitation, the angry Gohan turned Super Saiyan and rushed towards the goons. 'Nobody gonna get me the money! ? Alright! Boys! Start shootin'!' The goon yelled. All the goons started shooting the ground when Gohan attacked. Gohan jumped and kicked the main goon in the face, knocking his teeth out. The goon was knocked unconscious. 'Hey! Big mistake buddy!' Another goon yelled. The goon shot Gohan in the chest with his gun. It didn't effect the mighty Saiyan. All the goons slowly moved back in shock. Gohan rushed up to another goon and kneed him in the stomach. The goon spat out blood and was knocked unconscious aswell. The other goons ran as fast as they possibly could, trying to get away from Gohan. Gohan ran in front of them both. He moved so fast it looked like he used Instant Transmission. The scared goons fell onto the ground. 'Ahh! Please don't hurt us!' A goon said. Gohan laughed, grabbed that goon by the neck and threw him through a building. Before the other goon could get up and run, Gohan punched him in the face, knocking him out. All the citizens and authorities ran up to Gohan. 'That was amazing!' One man said. 'Can you show us more of your superpowers?' A child asked. 'Ahh! Gotta run!' Gohan said. He ran behind a building, far away from the other people and turned back to normal. He ran to the School.
Meanwhile, back outside the Bank, a teenage girl from Gohan's school arrived. 'What's going on here?' She said. 'Videl! You missed it! A young boy with superpowers saved us from Bank Robbers! And it looks like he goes to your school' A policeman said. 'A Superhuman who goes to my school? Who' Videl asked. 'I have no idea! I have never seen him before!' The policeman answered. 'I will find out who this hero is or my name isn't Videl Satan!' Videl thought. Videl ran to the School. Gohan had just arrived and was talking to the school principle. Videl arrived minutes later and rushed into class so she wouldn't be late. 'Okay Gohan, you may go to class, room 17' the school principle said. 'Thanks! Nice meeting you!' Gohan walked to the door of his classroom. Waiting to be introduced by the Teacher. 'Welcome class!' The Teacher said to the class. 'We have a new student! Come in Gohan' he said. Gohan walked into the classroom and stood near the teacher. 'Gohan here has perfect grades in English Literature, Mathematics and Science.' The Teacher told them. 'You can all learn something from this young man' He said. 'Gohan, do you want to say something to the class?' He asked. '...Hi..' Gohan said. 'Gohan, please pick a seat' The Teacher said. Gohan sat next to Videl. 'Hey!' Videl yelled. 'I remember seeing you at the at the Bank! At the time of the robbery!' She told Gohan. 'Ahh! Who are you?' Gohan asked. A girl sitting in front of Gohan turned around and faced him. 'Are you serious!?' She asked. 'She is Videl Satan! The daughter of the great Hercule Satan! She fights crime you know!' She continued. 'That's right! My father took out Cell! I am following in his footsteps!' Videl told him. A muscular boy turned around and started laughing. 'Yeah! She fights crime and what do you do!? You read books right!? What a bookworm!' he said. 'Hmm, could the new kid be the hero I have been hearing about? I heard the hero has golden hair, he might be one of them magic Humans who can change their hair colour from the Cell Games, but Dad said that was just a dirty trick! I should keep an eye on this guy!' Videl thought. Hours passed and the day was through, Gohan was at his locker when he heard two kids talking. 'Hey, did you hear about the 'Gold Fighter'?' One kid says to the other. 'Yeah! I heard he has superpowers! And that he gets them from his golden hair!' The other kid told him. Gohan closed his locker and walked out of the school. 'Oh no! I've only been at school for one day and people are already starting rumours about me! That girl almost figured me out too! That was too close, if I'm going to keep saving this town, I need a costume! Bulma might be able to help!' Gohan thought. Gohan flew into the air and was heading to Bulma's house.
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Feb 21 2012, 10:54 AM
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Get rid of the kids.
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Feb 21 2012, 12:25 PM
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- Feb 21 2012, 10:54 AM
Get rid of the kids. I thought about cutting them off, I wanna end it with...
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Feb 21 2012, 01:16 PM
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- Vegeta_Rules
- Feb 21 2012, 12:25 PM
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- Feb 21 2012, 10:54 AM
Get rid of the kids.
I thought about cutting them off, I wanna end it with... Spoiler: click to toggle Vegito! As the strongest character. Go for it. I suppose I'd be interested to see if you leave it a cliffhanger as to whether or not he's permanently there or if he splits somehow.
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Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
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Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
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Feb 21 2012, 01:26 PM
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- Teen GohanZ
- Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D: Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
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Feb 21 2012, 01:30 PM
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- Feb 21 2012, 01:26 PM
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- Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke. The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
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Feb 21 2012, 01:35 PM
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- Teen GohanZ
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- Teen GohanZ
- Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
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He obviously didn't like something about it or he wouldn't want to write. Damn!
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- Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
Spoiler: click to toggle He obviously didn't like something about it or he wouldn't want to write. Damn! If he thinks he can do better than Toriyama I'd like to see him try
I'm not usually the kind of person to say something like that but if you're gonna say the Buu saga sucked and plan to re-write it you better have skill to back yourself up.
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Feb 21 2012, 01:41 PM
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- Teen GohanZ
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- Feb 21 2012, 01:24 PM
Why are you re-writing it? Didn't you like the original? D:
Clearly, he didn't, you duke.
The ***** is a duke? Also he might have, people write fanfics of shows they like all the time.
Spoiler: click to toggle He obviously didn't like something about it or he wouldn't want to write. Damn!
If he thinks he can do better than Toriyama I'd like to see him try I'm not usually the kind of person to say something like that but if you're gonna say the Buu saga sucked and plan to re-write it you better have skill to back yourself up. I agree, but I also think it's kind of subjective. Who knows if his version of the Boo Arc would be just as good as Toriyama's in the eyes of the world.
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Feb 21 2012, 05:55 PM
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Good luck with it, I'm going to watch this space, I am in anticipation, it should be good.
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Feb 21 2012, 08:46 PM
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I like the Buu saga, I just want to rewrite it so it's problems are fixed.
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Feb 21 2012, 08:53 PM
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- Feb 21 2012, 08:46 PM
I like the Buu saga, I just want to rewrite it so it's problems are fixed. See bro, he didn't even hate it. I think you owe me an apology.
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Feb 21 2012, 09:02 PM
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- Teen GohanZ
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- Feb 21 2012, 08:46 PM
I like the Buu saga, I just want to rewrite it so it's problems are fixed.
See bro, he didn't even hate it. I think you owe me an apology. He logged off 
I don't want you guys calling eachother Dukes and debating if I like the Buu saga or not
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Feb 21 2012, 09:25 PM
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- Vegeta_Rules
- Feb 19 2012, 10:00 AM
The title might leave you asking questions, well, it's simple, I am going to re-write the Buu saga! I wrote my own saga before so this should be a piece of cake! I am working by myself unless anyone wants to help. I will get started right away. When is chapter 1 or part 1 coming out?
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